My name is Willy and I'm one of the commenters for the Summer Learning Journey. This is some nice work! I like how your DLO is set out, very clear and clean, and easy to read too :D sounds unfortunate reading they eat bird eggs, though :/ but otherwise an interesting flying animal! :D
Next time it would be a good idea to look at this presentation for how to attribute your images - to avoid plagiarism :D here's the link: https://bit.ly/2GG45YN
Keep up the good work! Hoping the start of the new year is going well for you!
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Hi Hannah!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Willy and I'm one of the commenters for the Summer Learning Journey. This is some nice work! I like how your DLO is set out, very clear and clean, and easy to read too :D sounds unfortunate reading they eat bird eggs, though :/ but otherwise an interesting flying animal! :D
Next time it would be a good idea to look at this presentation for how to attribute your images - to avoid plagiarism :D here's the link: https://bit.ly/2GG45YN
Keep up the good work! Hoping the start of the new year is going well for you!
-Willy