The cloud in picture two does look like a tornado, doesn't it? I really like how you've used the word 'invade' in your writing. It makes it seem like you're talking about a person. What's the strangest shaped cloud you've ever seen? I remember seeing one that looked like a dragon!
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The cloud in picture two does look like a tornado, doesn't it? I really like how you've used the word 'invade' in your writing. It makes it seem like you're talking about a person. What's the strangest shaped cloud you've ever seen? I remember seeing one that looked like a dragon!
Well done on completing another activity :)
Mā te wā,
Mikey