That's a lovely little poem you've written. I like how you've described the sky as 'dusty'. Would you be able to add a few lines about how it would make you feel to go to Shanghai?
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Kia ora Hannah,
ReplyDeleteThat's a lovely little poem you've written. I like how you've described the sky as 'dusty'. Would you be able to add a few lines about how it would make you feel to go to Shanghai?
Talk soon,
Mikey :)