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Tuesday 8 January 2019

The Sky in Shanghai

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  1. Kia ora Hannah,

    That's a lovely little poem you've written. I like how you've described the sky as 'dusty'. Would you be able to add a few lines about how it would make you feel to go to Shanghai?

    Talk soon,

    Mikey :)

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