This is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey team! Did you have a good day today? What did you today? I had to work at two different places today - Summer Learning Journey and tutoring! I like both of my work because it keeps me busy and I enjoy the work I have to do - it's fun!
You wrote an acrostic poem with the word TASMAN! This poem is a very fun and easy way of writing a poem because you are given the first letter to begin your sentence with! Your poem is simple but concise, short but meaningful and strong. That's the best thing about poems. It doesn't have to be a long story to deliver a message, it could only be few words. However, you will have to choose the words careful as one word could change the meaning and feeling of the poem. That's how you know that a word can be really powerful!
I liked reading and commenting on your work. It's fun to communicate and share ideas through blogging online!
I hope to read more of your blogs and have a good night!
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Hi Hannah,
ReplyDeleteThis is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey team! Did you have a good day today? What did you today? I had to work at two different places today - Summer Learning Journey and tutoring! I like both of my work because it keeps me busy and I enjoy the work I have to do - it's fun!
You wrote an acrostic poem with the word TASMAN! This poem is a very fun and easy way of writing a poem because you are given the first letter to begin your sentence with! Your poem is simple but concise, short but meaningful and strong. That's the best thing about poems. It doesn't have to be a long story to deliver a message, it could only be few words. However, you will have to choose the words careful as one word could change the meaning and feeling of the poem. That's how you know that a word can be really powerful!
I liked reading and commenting on your work. It's fun to communicate and share ideas through blogging online!
I hope to read more of your blogs and have a good night!
All the best,
Jade C.