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Saturday 23 December 2017

My voyage to New Zealand

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  1. Hi Hannah,

    Ruby here from the Summer Learning Journey team! It's great to see you've been working on these activities. Well done!

    Good work with this letter. I like how you have included a photo in the background. It makes it feel like a postcard!
    When you talked about leaving the only home you'd ever known, I thought that was powerful. A lot of settlers would have felt like that, I'm sure.

    Could you tell us some more about what the land looked like when you arrived? I wonder if there were any other people on the island or any strange creatures.

    I look forward to reading more of your blog over summer.
    Cheers,
    Ruby.

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