Ruby here from the Summer Learning Journey team! It's great to see you've been working on these activities. Well done!
Good work with this letter. I like how you have included a photo in the background. It makes it feel like a postcard! When you talked about leaving the only home you'd ever known, I thought that was powerful. A lot of settlers would have felt like that, I'm sure.
Could you tell us some more about what the land looked like when you arrived? I wonder if there were any other people on the island or any strange creatures.
I look forward to reading more of your blog over summer. Cheers, Ruby.
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Hi Hannah,
ReplyDeleteRuby here from the Summer Learning Journey team! It's great to see you've been working on these activities. Well done!
Good work with this letter. I like how you have included a photo in the background. It makes it feel like a postcard!
When you talked about leaving the only home you'd ever known, I thought that was powerful. A lot of settlers would have felt like that, I'm sure.
Could you tell us some more about what the land looked like when you arrived? I wonder if there were any other people on the island or any strange creatures.
I look forward to reading more of your blog over summer.
Cheers,
Ruby.