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Wednesday 5 July 2017

Hopeful

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous8:53 am, August 10, 2017

    I like it. it has some rhyming in it next time could you do a chapter or maybe get some ideas from others
    I like the picture you choose it looks amazing

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  2. Anonymous10:10 am, August 10, 2017

    Thanks I will try.

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  3. Anonymous11:52 am, September 13, 2017

    I like the way you used the detail It is so colours too.
    That reminds me how when I Was little walking around on the grass.
    Next time, you could use capital letters and full stops too
    I like the letters and the paintings. Would you like me to comment on another post of yours?

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